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August 19, 2010
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Canon
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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
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1/2 second
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F/16.0
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Jul 25, 2010 6:18:25 AM +02:00
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Flowing Blue by ZeSly Flowing Blue by ZeSly
Sunrise at Réou d'Arsine.

Ecrins National Park, French Alps.
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:iconladyrapid:
Majestic and dramatic scene with thousands of compositions awaits being captured.

This is a very nice place for photography but there's a couple things her that's gone wrong to get the shot as good as it could've been.

Light
Setting the light as you've done here sometimes works ver well but when you do it you gotta make sure you have a foreground that's not as dense as you got i here. Feels like the shot is a bit underexposed through the foreground.

Composition
Pool of water, nice mountains, green grass and a clear sky.
To use more of the sky here is a no-no, that wouldn't add anything. But to play around more with the foreground and how you have the lines here I think have room for improvement. For example, this shot needs more space outside the pool of water on each sides. The structure of the small river is all distorted and to crop it this close only projects the distorted look it has out on the composition. It needs more room basically.

Conclusion
This is a nice photo with massive potential. The landscape here just screams for being captured. If you have the chance, next you visit, try get some more lines in the shot that can lead the eye and to balance up the composition a bit more than you have now. It'll all set up a nicer photo. Also a wider shot or a vertical shot with more foreground would also work.

Keep workin!

/Rob
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porbital Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010   Photographer
You're featured :) [link]
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ZeSly Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot ! :dance:
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pho-t-ographic-s Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
marvellous!
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:iconzesly:
ZeSly Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks! :D
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Dreampixphotography Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
Nice scene with nice shot well done
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ZeSly Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank a lot :-)
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Mr-Tobi Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Excellent work with an amazing atmosphere. Well done. :clap:
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:iconzesly:
ZeSly Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :bow:
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Mr-Tobi Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
You are welcome.
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vindego Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010
Beautiful shot! Love the color of the water too, must be coming from a glacier?
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